As I roam across the streets at nights,
Drinking the beauty of the starry lights,
Aside, the dejection, I heavily wave,
Bits of strength, I try to save,
Letting the cool, caress my skin,
Tuning out, the worldly din,
Visualizing your smiling face,
Feeling my heart, fast at pace,
I plunge my mind into the sea,
Of my own beautiful fantasy,
Opening all the windows to hear,
Your voice, a melodious tinkle of air,
As an eternity elapse, I wait for thee,
To miraculously transform before me,
From merely an envisage of mind,
To a beating heart, flailing to bind.
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Image credits: http://wjlondon.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/02/Pro-Teq-Star-Path.jpg
Kabhi kabhi poem likhti hain per Aala hi likhti hain 🙂
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Thank you Fahad. 🙂
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Wow. This was amazing! 🙂
Now critique: The font is too large if you could get that normal sized I would be thankful. Also at places.. just nooks and corners it seemed as if the rhyme dulled the meaning. 🙂
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Thank you Sundus. I’ll check the font.
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Potterhead finally learned to rhymes.
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Idk if this critique is meant to offend or it’s a positive one.
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I’ve already made fool outta myself with my bad case of English grammar. Needless to say, my opinion can be downvoted to oblivion.
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Beautifully written 🙂
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thank you 🙂
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Welcome 🙂
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